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Eric, 75 y.o.

Netherlands

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" EXPLAIN "

!! EXPLAIN !!

LOVE is not complaining
It is YOU who will suffer
We all want just some explaining
But life only feels more tougher

So , what will be your next step
Your emotions just won't know
Can I be freed from this trap ?


It's my reward for making a vow



Remember back when you were young
Life was easy - come what may
You were smart and did nothing wrong
But growing up has a price to pay

We all have this special dream
Of a happiness so pure
But life played a tricky scheme
Now you're heartbroken and unsure

Can a broken heart be mend ?
Are YOU looking for more clues ?
No TRUE LOVE from heaven send
Where is that right person for you to choose ?

If we ALL could re-live life
We would know OUR past mistakes
But what a pity , in human life
There is no option for re-makes

Am I asking now too much ?
What's inside YOUR deepest mind
Do YOU still feel that sweet touch
Of the LOVE(R) YOU left behind ?

But sometimes , there is a HERO
Living inside a memory
When HIS/HER life , was at a BOTTOM low
HE/SHE turned a DREAM into REALITY

?? EX - PAIN ??

Eric c December 2016

It takes hard work and dedication to keep a Happy relation.
And when YOU don't , there may come a day , that YOU will ask (me)
this question : ! EXPLAIN !


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Ben


Good work! Did you write the poem yourself?

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Eric, 75 y.o.

Netherlands

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Thanks.Well I did put (C) at the end.
Yes , it's my own creation

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Elena, 53 y.o.

Ukraine

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красиво 

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Eric, 75 y.o.

Netherlands

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Elena thank you ...
In Odessa I like the Opera Theatre building (it's monumental)





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