Your previous post is this same poem, which was published in the section "Men & women" recently. I had noticed that before, and then I was wondering if it was a mistake of yours to have submitted there.
It seems like it was, as you posted the poetry in the theme "My art" this time, place that I think more appropriated for your creation.
Anyway, what is the original language of the poem? Is it English (the same way written in your post) or Portuguese (your native idiom)?
I ask that question because some elements of a poem may be affected when it is translated, such as rhyme, alignment, sense, etc. I do not know if it is the case of this poetry.