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Milton, 63 y.o.

Brazil

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THE VASE, THE FLOWER AND THE LOVE

Man is the root,
The woman is the soil.
Man is the seed,
The woman is the water
The man is the stem
The woman is the petal
Man is the leaf
The woman is the flower
Man is the reason,
The woman is the love
Both together,


One emotion


A GOD project
Many blessings on the hands.    

Milton - 08/05/2014

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André Luiz, 34 y.o.

Brazil

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Your previous post is this same poem, which was published in the section "Men & women" recently. I had noticed that before, and then I was wondering if it was a mistake of yours to have submitted there.
It seems like it was, as you posted the poetry in the theme "My art" this time, place that I think more appropriated for your creation.
Anyway, what is the original language of the poem? Is it English (the same way written in your post) or Portuguese (your native idiom)?
I ask that question because some elements of a poem may be affected when it is translated, such as rhyme, alignment, sense, etc. I do not know if it is the case of this poetry.

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Milton, 63 y.o.

Brazil

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Reply to André Luiz on View the commented comment

Actually by virtue of the habit of entering here, I ended up posting in the wrong place, when I observed, I waited for those responsible for the site to correct what had not happened.
So I decided to post in the right place and also put a comment apologizing, but it did not appear!
You have a Brazilian name and I believe it is one, I wrote those verses in Portuguese, but I decided to go to English before posting, apparently from what I noticed here, it did not make any difference. Thanks for the guidance !!





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